My year!

Being a year 5 has been awesome.
Why?
This year I went to Year 5 living springs camp that was a blast when we go too see the country side and get to know all the people in my class.
All so this year I got the chance to go to Orana wildlife park it was really cool to see all the cheeky,friendly and funny animals. I leant a lot about the wild life!

I got some much opportunity's to do things since i was officially a senior student.
I got my Bronze,Sliver and Gold this year!

I wonder what year 6 could bring me?

Word work week 7 term 3.

WALT:look in a dictionary and search up the letter at the start of our name and make a paragraph about all of the words.

What I learnt was to search up the letter of R in my name and make a sentence out of all the words I found.  

My next step is make it funny - I found it hard to make the sentences funny with the words I found. 

Peace dove week 6.

WALT relate to others. 

This is my peace dove that we made for peace week about what people think we are.

What I learnt was that I was wrong about what I thought I was and that others think that I'm better. 

What we did was write down on others paper what we thought they were. Everyone had to try write on everyone's paper a positive comment or word to describe them. 

My next step is to try to and have more faith in myself that the good things people wrote are true. 

Blogging

WALT describe a character 

What I leant was to describe a person with what they look like and what did they do.

My next step is to describe the character bit more.

The joke

 WALT write a story about a thing that you don't know about

.Work on writing week 1 term 3.

           !The joke!

One summery hot January day Mr Philips woke up from a horrible nights sleep. He looked in the mirror and glimpsed at his normal face with boogers and potatoes stuck in his beard. Someone would die if they looked at him. Here comes the gross bit he put all the bugs in his hair he killed over all the years. Mr Philips hadn’t showered in 36 years (That’s how old Mr Philips was). If you were wanting to know Mr Philips real name is Trevor.

Mr Philips lived in a horrible  old caravan with a broken tv and a bed that know one knows how long it hasn’t  been made for. He also had a broken kitchen table. But, Trevor has two friends, it’s remarkable that he actually has friends called Michel De Santa and Franklin Clinton. Trevor did not appreciate them. Franklin came  up to visit trevor to tell him something special. Trevor saw Franklin at the door he was screaming like an ape. Franklin had not seen trevor in 16 years. Franklin asked Trevor “where did you come from? And how are you still living?”

“Well I’m here so I should tell you Trevor.”

“What?” said Trevor. “Just tell me.”

“Ok you might flip but I got a girlfriend named Nicky …………….” Part 2 out soon.  
My next step is to do a better story about a made up character.

Word work Week 1, Term 3

WALT spell new words right.

If you watch really closely you can see the end of a rainbow.

I hopped on the trapoline.

I love my parents.

The guard  was watching the Queens house. 

It happened she broke her arm and leg.

For cross contry we ran across the field.

You go to the hospital when you are really badly sick.

Some people get hit by lightning.

I probably  should go home now.

I grabbed my lunch box.

my next step is to put these words in my work

Creative writing Week 1 Term 3

                                WALT write creatively with lots of descriptive language.

I learnt about how to make my stories more interesting to hook the reader.

My next  step is to make more of a story line.