Riley Persuasive writing

7/9 WALT: Write a text will persuade others to believe in our opinion.

 We know we have achieved this when:

1. Introduction:stating the argument
2. Persuasive  words
3. Persuasive Sentence starters
4. Share your personal Opinion
5. Each paragraph has a main point (Usually the beginning)
6. Persuasive words
7. Persuasive Sentence Starters
8. Share your Personal Opinion

Pros (For)

Cons (Against)

You can represent your school in the community because people will be able to recognise which school you are from You will need more clothes if wearing mufti and this will be more costly. Check Postie Plus, The Warehouse prices. To help people know what their school logo. Is cheaper clothing going to wear as well. Mufti clothes would not last as long perhaps if they are cheap and made from less durable fabric.

You need to buy them each year as you grow, this costs our parents a lot of money. It can be more comfortable not wearing a school uniform is running around a lot eg in sports gear. We have a lot of normal clothes and we hardly get to wear them so we shouldn't have uniform. Cheaper to buy mufti clothes You will need School Clothes and mufti clothes (weekend) so will be a greater cost. We have a lot of mufti clothes that I do not get to wear very often-this makes parents angry. School clothes are a big rip off for mass produced clothing - big demand but more expensive. Too hot because of materials they’re made out of - polyester

  

Students Should NOT Wear a School Uniform to School Introduction: In my opinion Students should NOT wear School Uniform at school.

We have tons of mufti clothes that we don't get to wear Most Students have normal clothes at home that they don't get to wear because we have to wear uniform 5 day a week for 6 hours. Uniforms are way too expensive compared to normal clothes here an example. At schooltex (Uniform shop) my total for pants a shirt, hat and a Polar Fleece it came to $109.96 and then I went to The Warehouse and my total for buying pants, shirt, hat and a jacket was $39.09

2. When we go to highschool what are we going to do with our uniform          When we go to highschool or a different school what will do with our uniform throw it out?

3. School uniforms are way to uncomfortable Running around it's way too tight At some schools they have dress and skirts so when you do the monkey bars or hang upside down your dress will fall down and people will see something they don't want to see

So overall we should not wear uniform because we have tons of normals clothes, what will you do if you go to  a different school what will you do with your uniform and uniforms are WAY too uncomfortable. Thanks for listening

We should NOT wear school uniform to school

Today i will be sharing with you reasons why we should NOT wear school uniform to school.

First of all at home we have a lot of mufti clothes that we don't get to wear because 5 days a week for over 190 to 200 days we have to wear school uniform for 6 hours. That means that we hardly get to wear normal clothes. And did you know that school uniforms are WAY to expensive compared to normal clothes. At school tex (A school uniform shop)  my total for pants a shirt, hat and a Polar Fleece it came to $109.96 and then I went to The Warehouse and my total for buying a pair pants, shirt, hat and a jacket was $39.09 so you can see the price difference.

My second reason is that when we go to a different school or high school what will we do with are uniform. Because you would have spent over $100 or even $500 on a school uniform and it's just a waste of money getting rid of them. So what would YOU do?

My last and final reason is school uniforms are WAY to uncomfortable. The material rubs on your body and is most annoying because the top and pants are way too tight!! At most schools students have to wear dress and skirts and say that you're doing the monkey bars and hang upside down then people will see something they don't want to see!!

So overall we should not wear uniform because we have tons of normals clothes, what will you do if you go to  a different school what will you do with your uniform and uniforms are WAY too uncomfortable. Thanks for listening

Too Much TV Level 3

I think I'm level 3 because I wrote to that standard. And I put as much detail as I could.