Technology (merit week 1, blog post 1)

Today we had technology. I'm doing science this pentad. Today we dissected muscles and seeing what the body parts were. While I was there I showed respect by listening to the teacher and not being silly.

Novel book review

The story Ghosts is about two sisters named Catrina and Maya. There family moved to a new strange town named Bahía de la Luna that was all about ghosts, all everybody would talk about was ghosts.When the girls were exploring the new town they met a boy named Carlos he was a worker that would take people on tours around town and tell them facts about the ghosts. While Carlos was showing the girls around the town and where the ghosts where Maya got to excited when she saw the ghost and the worst happens

Rileys Chinses test

WALT vocabulary and phrases about the Family.

On my Chinese test I got 7 out of 10 and 70%
I am very happy for what score I got.

Pokeyman and the voice

It all started 76 years ago in a land far far away, well in New York city, there lived Jacob Sartorius. He tried hard to sing but he just couldn't, he sounded like a dying illama. BUT, on the other side of the world in a land called China lived Pokeyman who was the world's best singer, well in his mind he was. When Jacob heard about this he was devastated. So Jacob set off on an adventure to get Pokeyman’s voice. Jacob wants to be the very best singer no one ever was. So he’s going to get the voice of Pokeyman. On the way there he fell in a hole.

“Oh no,” he cried.

Pokeyman received a phone call on his pokey phone, he picked it up and this is what happened

“Hello Pokeyman I'm coming after your voice and you'll never get it back,” said the unknown voice. Pokeyman wasn't scared because EVERYONE wants his voice but it never happens.

One year later Jacob had made it to China. Now he has to find the pokey cave. Jacob didn't Know where to start it was like he was lost in the ocean. Jacob saw millions of caved in places but not the pokey cave. But what he didn't know is that the pokey cave is in the city where most people won't think a cave would be. Jacob finally gave up on looking in all the caves in the mountains. So he decided to go to the city and stay the night in a hotel and find some food. He found a Chinese hotel to stay the night in that provided free food.

Early next morning at the crack of dawn Jacob set off to find the pokey cave (again). Meanwhile in the Pokey cave Pokeyman received a phone call from a unknown person he picked up the phone and this is what it said, “I'm here in China Pokeyman and I WILL get your voice”.

Suddenly the phone hung there beeping…. Pokemon thought that it could be true so he diced to lock up his voice.

A few moments later Pokeman heard a huge bang. Pokeyman stepped quietly to the locked door. He saw Zubat hitting the wall over and over again because he was sleep flying. But on the other side of the room Pokeyman saw a little Elf fly in trew the window Pokeyman got the fly swat and banged it POOF the little Elf came flying down and laid there. Pokeyman heard a deep voice that sounded like a moose. He walked step by step to where the sound came from AHAH there was a ugly monster standing in front of Pokeyman. It was Jacob. Pokeyman didn't believe it that Jacob really came for his voice. Jacob walked up to Pokeyman and said “Give me your voice or it will get more horrible”. Pokeyman said no i'm good. Jacob was not happy with that so Jacob pulled out his Elf squad and Pokeyman pulled out his Zubat.

Jacob said, “Elf squad go”

Pokeyman said, “Zubat I choose you”,

The elves and Zubats kept on hitting and fighting each other until Jacob had enough so he started singing and Pokeyman fell to the ground he said, “Get me some bleech”.

Pokeyman woke up after being knocked out, everything was blurry. He glimpsed to his side and saw Jacob trying to get into the heavy armed room that held Pokeyman’s voice. Jacob had a pocket knife and scissors that were hacking at the wall. Pokeyman stood up feet by feet and limped over to Jacob and said stop Jacob there's a better end to this, Jacob looked at Pokeyman and sighed then Jacob continued.

Pokeyman said quietly, “Jacob I'll pay for you to get singing lessons then you can be the best singer in the world, better than than than me”.

Jacob stopped and helped Pokeyman up and walked him over to the couch and sat him down. They talked for hours. All of a sudden Pokeyman said, “Let's go and organise you some singing lessons, NOW”.  

Will Jacob make it to Number 1 on the top music charts?

Riley's dream big

 WALT:Make changes to show excellence in school design

What changes do I need to make to achieve excellence in school design?
Multistructural Teacher Directed	Relational Learner Directed	Extended Abstract Learner Autonomous
I can describe several ideas for creating school designs. What changes do I need to make to achieve excellence in school design?	I can describe several ideas for creating school designs. And I can compare and contrast ideas between Oaklands School in 2016 and what it could look like in the future.	I can describe several ideas for creating school designs. And I can compare and contrast ideas between Oaklands School in 2016 and what it could look like in the future. And I can look at these qualities in a new way by creating and presenting an idea for what Oaklands School might look like in the future.

Riley's maths

WALT:Whole unknowns

Question: 3 of _ =27
                 _
                 4
How you work it out     3 ÷ 27= 9
9 x 4 = 36

So the answer is 36

3 of 36 =27
 _
 4

Riley Persuasive writing

7/9 WALT: Write a text will persuade others to believe in our opinion.

 We know we have achieved this when:

1. Introduction:stating the argument
2. Persuasive  words
3. Persuasive Sentence starters
4. Share your personal Opinion
5. Each paragraph has a main point (Usually the beginning)
6. Persuasive words
7. Persuasive Sentence Starters
8. Share your Personal Opinion

Pros (For)

Cons (Against)

You can represent your school in the community because people will be able to recognise which school you are from You will need more clothes if wearing mufti and this will be more costly. Check Postie Plus, The Warehouse prices. To help people know what their school logo. Is cheaper clothing going to wear as well. Mufti clothes would not last as long perhaps if they are cheap and made from less durable fabric.

You need to buy them each year as you grow, this costs our parents a lot of money. It can be more comfortable not wearing a school uniform is running around a lot eg in sports gear. We have a lot of normal clothes and we hardly get to wear them so we shouldn't have uniform. Cheaper to buy mufti clothes You will need School Clothes and mufti clothes (weekend) so will be a greater cost. We have a lot of mufti clothes that I do not get to wear very often-this makes parents angry. School clothes are a big rip off for mass produced clothing - big demand but more expensive. Too hot because of materials they’re made out of - polyester

  

Students Should NOT Wear a School Uniform to School Introduction: In my opinion Students should NOT wear School Uniform at school.

We have tons of mufti clothes that we don't get to wear Most Students have normal clothes at home that they don't get to wear because we have to wear uniform 5 day a week for 6 hours. Uniforms are way too expensive compared to normal clothes here an example. At schooltex (Uniform shop) my total for pants a shirt, hat and a Polar Fleece it came to $109.96 and then I went to The Warehouse and my total for buying pants, shirt, hat and a jacket was $39.09

2. When we go to highschool what are we going to do with our uniform          When we go to highschool or a different school what will do with our uniform throw it out?

3. School uniforms are way to uncomfortable Running around it's way too tight At some schools they have dress and skirts so when you do the monkey bars or hang upside down your dress will fall down and people will see something they don't want to see

So overall we should not wear uniform because we have tons of normals clothes, what will you do if you go to  a different school what will you do with your uniform and uniforms are WAY too uncomfortable. Thanks for listening

We should NOT wear school uniform to school

Today i will be sharing with you reasons why we should NOT wear school uniform to school.

First of all at home we have a lot of mufti clothes that we don't get to wear because 5 days a week for over 190 to 200 days we have to wear school uniform for 6 hours. That means that we hardly get to wear normal clothes. And did you know that school uniforms are WAY to expensive compared to normal clothes. At school tex (A school uniform shop)  my total for pants a shirt, hat and a Polar Fleece it came to $109.96 and then I went to The Warehouse and my total for buying a pair pants, shirt, hat and a jacket was $39.09 so you can see the price difference.

My second reason is that when we go to a different school or high school what will we do with are uniform. Because you would have spent over $100 or even $500 on a school uniform and it's just a waste of money getting rid of them. So what would YOU do?

My last and final reason is school uniforms are WAY to uncomfortable. The material rubs on your body and is most annoying because the top and pants are way too tight!! At most schools students have to wear dress and skirts and say that you're doing the monkey bars and hang upside down then people will see something they don't want to see!!

So overall we should not wear uniform because we have tons of normals clothes, what will you do if you go to  a different school what will you do with your uniform and uniforms are WAY too uncomfortable. Thanks for listening

Too Much TV Level 3

I think I'm level 3 because I wrote to that standard. And I put as much detail as I could.