Wednesday, 29 July 2015


WALT describe a character 
What I leant was to describe a person with what they look like and what did they do.
My next step is to describe the character bit more.

Thursday, 23 July 2015

The joke

 WALT write a story about a thing that you don't know about

.Work on writing week 1 term 3.

           !The joke!

One summery hot January day Mr Philips woke up from a horrible nights sleep. He looked in the mirror and glimpsed at his normal face with boogers and potatoes stuck in his beard. Someone would die if they looked at him. Here comes the gross bit he put all the bugs in his hair he killed over all the years. Mr Philips hadn’t showered in 36 years (That’s how old Mr Philips was). If you were wanting to know Mr Philips real name is Trevor.

Mr Philips lived in a horrible  old caravan with a broken tv and a bed that know one knows how long it hasn’t  been made for. He also had a broken kitchen table. But, Trevor has two friends, it’s remarkable that he actually has friends called Michel De Santa and Franklin Clinton. Trevor did not appreciate them. Franklin came  up to visit trevor to tell him something special. Trevor saw Franklin at the door he was screaming like an ape. Franklin had not seen trevor in 16 years. Franklin asked Trevor “where did you come from? And how are you still living?”
“Well I’m here so I should tell you Trevor.”
“What?” said Trevor. “Just tell me.”
“Ok you might flip but I got a girlfriend named Nicky …………….” Part 2 out soon.  
My next step is to do a better story about a made up character.

Image result for trevor philips

Word work Week 1, Term 3

WALT spell new words right.

If you watch really closely you can see the end of a rainbow.

I hopped on the trapoline.

I love my parents.

The guard  was watching the Queens house. 

It happened she broke her arm and leg.

For cross contry we ran across the field.

You go to the hospital when you are really badly sick.

Some people get hit by lightning.

I probably  should go home now.

I grabbed my lunch box.

my next step is to put these words in my work

Creative writing Week 1 Term 3

                                WALT write creatively with lots of descriptive language.

I learnt about how to make my stories more interesting to hook the reader.

My next  step is to make more of a story line.

Sunday, 12 July 2015

2.7.15 Riley animal mash up.

information report

WALT:use our imaginations to combine interesting animals characteristics.

The Unicat the worlds weirdest animal. A unicorn and a cat ran into each other, and turned into a Unicat. The top of the head is unicorn and the bottom bit is cat. Here are 2 facts about the Unicat. It has rainbow hair that glows so you can see it. They also like to play in clean, freezing cold water.

The unicat uses its ears to eat. It is a really weird animal to have. The type of food the unicat eats is rainbicks (cat biscuits mixed with rainbows) they do not eat other food, if you do they will fart really smelly farts - so beware! They get their food from people who visit them (as they are so popular) and give them the tasty treats.

If you were wanting to know were the great UniCats live you will most likely find UniCats at the end of a rainbows. Because it feels really natural to the animals. They live in New Zealand, New York,rainbow land and open spaces.

UniCats seem to react weird when humans are not around. Like one time we left a someones phone there and they run round making a mess. We all think the look stunning but be ware they are little devils from hell. They are happy when they are with other UniCats they act like there so so so so so happy when friends.

One thing you should know about UniCats that they are 2 centimetres tall.
My next step is to get my spelling better and to make it more interesting.
What I did was write a information report about the animal unicat I made up.
By Riley Betman­čśä


Wednesday, 1 July 2015

1.7.15 Word work

In the school holidays i'm going to see my gran.

I'm allowed to go to my grandmas house.

All ways believe in your self.

I got a chocolate Easter egg for Easter.

In my bank account I have 50 dollars.

I think of other people before MYSELF

I like to play with my friends.

At least I TRIED 

Everything is possible.

You finally did it.